Tassen Spellbinder

The only comment I have is that your fifth stanza needs punctuation to conclude it.

The hypothesis was that gender affects your preference in picture (actor vs actress). Simply put, the generalization is "guys like girls" and vice versa.

This is true. So maybe I'll let this run for a bit, then make another poll with new pictures. That said, accepting suggestions. Make them equally attractive, please.

Just for the heck of it, I think I'll re-open this poll. Let the voting commence anew!

This poll will close *tonight*. Vote now!

The wording of the poll options has now been changed to clear up any possible confusion.

I'm conducting a social experiment, hypothesis to be revealed upon completion. Should you choose to participate, please view the two images at the links below, and choose one of the ...

Thank you very much for the input!

Beautiful poem. The only real suggestion I have would be to break your first stanza after 'body, so it reads like this' Blind me, Love Take my breath Stay the ...

Hello, Red_Helix7! Tassen Spellbinder here to review your work! First of all, I think your rhyme scheme, if anything, detracts from the poem. In some places, it sounds rather forced. ...

I like how you tried to write this poem to be flowing, but I really think you should use some more punctuation. At the very least, I would end each ...

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Hello, Lottyyy! Tassen Spellbinder here to review your poem! The first thing I noticed was "forehead craters like the gleaming moon which we gaze from different shores," -- I think ...

Hello, Kamas! Tassen Spellbinder here to have a look at your poem! I'm going to just copy-paste the lines that I saw things in, and go from there. Misleading causes ...

'ello, Biffle! Tassen Spellbinder here to review your piece! "My eyes burst open, the light searing them. Sarah is next to me on the opaque hospital seats. There is a ...